New composition: Achilles Heel

Tempo: 188
Key: D

Song in Gmail

Awsome!!!!!

This is a masterpiece.

Aïe, sorry, but I'm not so much anthousiastic as Bernard...
I don't like very much this song...

Well I have mixed feelings about that one ... when I heard it the first time, it sounded like a patchwork with not much connections between the different parts ... Don't get me wrong, there are parts that are good but the whole thing doesn't work too well ... Plus the tempo at 188 ... I am not a big fan of that kind of upbeat songs ... But you seem to like that very much because in almost every songs you posted, you have that kind of tempo.

Hmm, maybe I should stop proposing stuff, my tracks seem to hit the wrong chord somehow, there is enough in the pipeline anyways.

Gosh... I'm surprised of the reactions...

But the problem may be that as Phil said, it seems to be a kind of "patchwork" and the structure of the song does not appear clearly to our ears. I think we are all very formated like this : intro-verse-chorus-verse-chorus-solo-final chorus.

However I think that the riff themselves are good and the stops in between interresting.

Maybe, yeah, the structure right now is:

Intro until 0:31
Verse1 until 0:52
Bridge1 until 01:13
Refrain 1 until 1:33, after that
Verse2
Bridge2
Refrain2
Intro/Interlude or Solo
Refrain3 & 4

But structure can be changed anyways ...

Great. I will listen to it again with the timing in front of me.

Hmm, maybe I should stop proposing stuff

Don't give up, Chris! I listen to your compositions with pleasure: some I love, some I like... some I don't like.

There are many stuff, and thus each new song is compared with existing songs under construction: we can be critical to keep only the best...